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Vivek Tiwari - Wrong Verification!

2014-06-17 7 Dailymotion

Trouble and trouble and trouble all times
Whenever I try to appreciate the lines-

Lines from my friends' creations
To add my feelings of appreciation.

They don't let me add my praises
When I wanna enjoy their pages.

Nor they let me value their creation
Comes interruption of 'Wrong Verification'

While I know I'm right
As I'm guided by sense and sight.

Yet it says try again
Repeated efforts are all in vain.

Disturbs even Hata 500 a bit
Again problem in clicking to submit.

My heart yet thanks you share your lines
And let me enjoy your rhythm and rhymes.

Vivek Tiwari

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